Writing with friends(Timote)

Every child should play a team in sport

Although both arguments have valid Issues, The Amazing side is that you could be that guy on television who makes Millions of Dollars like Cristiano Ronaldo and Jason Taumalolo did 1 day, However some Injuries could possibly happen and may take stitches somehow.


My First reason is that you get to play your favorite team because you can represent your own country or just move to a team you love but on the contrary you can be away from your family and friends, You would need to make friends that's hard for some people because they look for new ones every day.

My Second reason why is that you get to play your favorite team and be who you look up to. It’s very very Important to listen to your coach if your in a rugby club

Sentence starters for persuavive writing

Rugby is better than Netball

I believe that rugby is better than netball cause it is more physical and makes u more fit and you get paid more money.

I think that rugby is better cause rugby is more exercise and get more fit also more money and netball players only have to stand still when they get the ball.

I Agree that Rugby makes thousands of dollars but netball makes 1.5 Million dollars Which is shocking.

My first reason is that you have more energy to run 109.4 yard around the field, and netball fields are 8.30 meters which is small for warm up running. Shawn Johnson is a Rugby legend and has made 10 million dollars over the years.  

Cars should be Banned!

I believe that  cars should be banned because global warming is a disaster for homeless people and they might sweat and may thirst.

I think that cars should be banned and just walk also block the motorway so it can be used for walking and biking.

I agree that

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Havea's Habitat

Rat trap

Telescope

Yoga 2

Collaborate, Cooperate, Counterbalance, embarrassing, Faintly, Embracing, Complicated, Flexible, “Are you Ready”, Body Weight, Incredible, Davlyn,Railey,Michael, Shy, Mid air, Wednesday 17 of october, “This is Impossible”.


It was a beautiful sunny Wednesday, Mean while our teacher (Miss Ashley) was planning another special activity for Rm7, It was 8:56 AM and the bell nearly rung and it was go time for the rugby players,”Yay” I shouted with joy, While Miss Ashley was doing the roll I was thinking “This may be impossible”, Miss had finally finished the roll we had to our Niuean words for Niuean language week. 5 minutes later we had to do amazing jobs like, Girls push the tables to the wall, and boys had to push the chairs to the side to have more space to stretch and bend.”Are you ready” Miss ashley said with pride, “YES!!!!”Room 7 shouted.

The first thing we had to do was find a squad for our yoga, Of course I picked were Davlyn,Railey and Michael. Our squad thought it was complicated but really some weren't, “Are you Ready for the first pose” Miss ashley said, “Yes” Replied Rm7, the first  pose was a spiral and all the boys came together and made it, but you had to do cross hands and make your legs straight. The worst was the last one because you had to use your sort of balance but in the end we did it same as the girls,

I want to do it again because it’s really really fun and I could be a gymnast one day.

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P.E

On Monday 24th of September, It was a School day, I had been waiting this whole time for P.E to start once again. P.E is a fun Physical Education sport thingy ma jiggy, That helps you write a Incredible story. So Miss Ashley Promised to do P.E today, We had to either

choose touch or Softball. So Miss Ashley thought and thought and she said “Softball for 20 Minutes and touch for 5mins.

” Of course I didn't feel like playing touch because I liked Tackles to toughen people up, So I Played Ball tag with Tipene; Railey; Havea and Davlyn.

   

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Here is our edited story.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.

Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“  However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina.  We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.

First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy)  put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.

Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!

I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.

Obby

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It was Friday September the 21rst, When I walked inside class I took one Big Glance at the white board and I saw writing on it, But you might think it’s boring But it’s not. But room 7 and I do an Spelended activity. “Ok Right After the roll I have something special For yall” Mrs Ashley said with pride. “YAYYYYY!!!!!” SO we got into buddies and mine were Railey and Leon, Mrs Ashley Gave instructions and what made it more challenging was that she moved the furniture. By the way you could not move the furniture or you would lose minus 1 point towards your team.

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All of room 7 got into buddies but because Havea didn't have anyone so me and Railey put him in our group because he is our friends so we wanted to be nice to him that’s why we put him our group, I was the first one in our group who went first I felt paralyzed and also blind while I had the blindfold on when Railey and Havea had their turn they felt the same as well.

Me and Havea had a hard time telling Railey where to go because he was kinda not listening to me and him because he went his own way but he did really good because I liked how thinked about what we said so he was a very good listener and followed instructions.

Conclusion

I felt so Energetic and it was super fun I could not feel my legs afterwards.

MAths Reflection

Earthquakes And Tsunami

                THIS IS FOR THE EARTHQUAKES ONE

                                Earthquakes

How do Earthquakes happen:

Earthquakes mostly happen when two tectonic plates collide together. When they collide it makes the ground shake and it can make the crust go up and creates new mountains. The most dangerous place to be when earthquakes happen is on or near the epicenter. The closer you are to the epicenter, the more damage the earthquake causes, compared to other people that are further from the epicenter. If you are far from the epicenter you will have a higher chance of being safe from shockwaves.

Hard words:

Collide: (collide is when tectonic plates fight for the top like the game get on top) shockwave (shockwave are what makes the ground shakes)

What is going to be After:

After an earthquake is a big impact It is so unpredictable because it can destroy buildings or kill people or animals. Anything near the epicentre of the earthquake will have a bigger impact than something far away. After an earthquake, there are aftershocks which are small earthquakes that lessen over time. After an earthquake could be extremely dangerous, because it can leave heaps of cracks in the ground that could break your ankle by falling down the crack.

hard Words:

epicentre (the epicentre middle of the earthquake) extremely dangerous (extremely dangerous is when it is very dangerous)

                                   Tsunami:

Tsunamis can be caused the same way as earthquakes with 2 tectonic plates fighting. That is why when you have a big earthquake you should be expecting a big tsunami I got that form a school journal.

                

Jebi Jebi Jebi Jebi Jebi

Hurricane Florence

Writing bad intros

WHO: Room 7

WHAT: played the maths game

WHEN: Thursday 14th September

WHERE: in the hall

WHY: to practice our maths skills

HOW: we walked there, in teams of 6.

Bad Intro:  Room 7 played the maths game. It was Thursday 14th September 2018. We were in the hall. We did it to practice our maths skills. We walked there and we were in teams.

*notice how the information are all in separate sentences* - don’t do that, it’s boring to read.

On Thursday morning (the 14th September 2018), Room 7 walked out the to the hall to play the maths game. Room 7 plays this game so we can practice our maths skills and have a bit of a running around break.

*Put the information into sentences TOGETHER. Much better to read*

WHO: Me and my family

WHAT: went to the beach

WHEN: Saturday 8th September

WHERE: Mission bay

WHY: to have fun and enjoy the sunshine

HOW: drove in the car

Intro: On Saturday 8th September,Me and my family went to the beach,around mission bay To have fun and enjoy sunshine. By the way we drove in a car

WHO: me and my best friend

WHAT: went to the movies and had lunch

WHEN: on Sunday 9th September

WHERE: Sylvia Park

WHY: for my birthday

HOW: mum dropped us off in the car

Intro:Me and my best friend went to the movies, To have lunch for my birthday. At Sylvia park, My mum dropped us off in a car.

WHO: Me and my family

WHAT: went to nana’s house

WHEN: after church on Sunday 9th September

WHERE: nana’s house in Panmure

WHY: to have lunch together, help plan for cousins 21st party

HOW: drove in the van

Intro:Me and my family went to nana’s house after church on Sunday 9th September. nana’s house was in Panmure to have lunch together, we were helping plan for Sisters 21st Birthday

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Capital ‘I’	✓	✓	X
Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓	X
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	✓	X
Speech marks when people are talking	✓	✓	X
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓	✓	X
Words are written in past tense	✓	X	X
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓	X	X
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓	X	X
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓	✓	X
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	✓	✓	X
Ideas/events in the right order	✓	✓	X
3 paragraphs	✓	✓	X
Metaphors and similes	✓	X	X
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓	✓	X

Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
Capital ‘I’
Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence
Speech marks when people are talking
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
Words are written in past tense
Connectives - next, then, afterwards
Interesting and difficult adjectives
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
Ideas/events in the right order
3 paragraphs
Metaphors and similes
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex