Car Crash

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, Axel Belvins , 60 year old man	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, scars	Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone playing Mobil Fortnite.	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	Death of Jax
Intro 2 sentences	One Fantastic Evening The kids had decided to have a very wet day.They had forgot that there dad was around a highway.
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	In the year 2012 july the 4th their Dad Axel had been a alcoholic for nearly 12 years now. Axel had his kids in the year 2000, He has very unique twins named Jax and Dax it was their birthday tomorrow and they wanted there dad to celebrate to. Because it was there 20th birthday, Because there dad promised them a Ak47 the most violent gun in san diego.
Problem 5-10 sentences	As the twins went on they had been waiting for hours but the dad was trying his first ever Cigarette Axel thinks it is more important in his life. Jax went out in his car looking for his dad, But little did he know there was a bank robbery. He was held hostage and was taken to prison because he got caught with the bank money. He had try telling the cops but they did not believe him.
Solution 5-10 sentences	The dad and Dax saw Jax on the news bared up, They both knew it was a trick, The dad did not go for alcohol so he helped his son get out of jail. They stumbled across the police and they had a little talk. They went to the jail and took him out with the $100 he saved up. They went home and Ava (Mother) was there. They looked disappointed and banished them outside the house
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	After a couple of years There dad died they had no funeral because he was very drunk man. Later Jax died from the Latino Gang. Dax was left all alone but he only knew it was always right to take revenge for his brother. He went on and killed The latino gang with the Pump Shotgun his dad gave him before he died.