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Writing bad intros

WHO: Room 7

WHAT: played the maths game

WHEN: Thursday 14th September

WHERE: in the hall

WHY: to practice our maths skills

HOW: we walked there, in teams of 6.

Bad Intro:  Room 7 played the maths game. It was Thursday 14th September 2018. We were in the hall. We did it to practice our maths skills. We walked there and we were in teams.

*notice how the information are all in separate sentences* - don’t do that, it’s boring to read.

On Thursday morning (the 14th September 2018), Room 7 walked out the to the hall to play the maths game. Room 7 plays this game so we can practice our maths skills and have a bit of a running around break.

*Put the information into sentences TOGETHER. Much better to read*

WHO: Me and my family

WHAT: went to the beach

WHEN: Saturday 8th September

WHERE: Mission bay

WHY: to have fun and enjoy the sunshine

HOW: drove in the car

Intro: On Saturday 8th September,Me and my family went to the beach,around mission bay To have fun and enjoy sunshine. By the way we drove in a car

WHO: me and my best friend

WHAT: went to the movies and had lunch

WHEN: on Sunday 9th September

WHERE: Sylvia Park

WHY: for my birthday

HOW: mum dropped us off in the car

Intro:Me and my best friend went to the movies, To have lunch for my birthday. At Sylvia park, My mum dropped us off in a car.

WHO: Me and my family

WHAT: went to nana’s house

WHEN: after church on Sunday 9th September

WHERE: nana’s house in Panmure

WHY: to have lunch together, help plan for cousins 21st party

HOW: drove in the van

Intro:Me and my family went to nana’s house after church on Sunday 9th September. nana’s house was in Panmure to have lunch together, we were helping plan for Sisters 21st Birthday

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Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
Capital ‘I’
Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence
Speech marks when people are talking
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
Words are written in past tense
Connectives - next, then, afterwards
Interesting and difficult adjectives
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
Ideas/events in the right order
3 paragraphs
Metaphors and similes
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex

Diasters

Information report: natural disasters

Natural disasters are a phenomenon which occur all around the world. Some are caused by moving tectonic plates, some are caused by wind and air pressure, and some are caused by other natural disasters.

Information report: natural disasters

Natural disasters are a phenomenon which occur all around the world. Some are caused by moving tectonic plates, some are caused by wind and air pressure, and some are caused by other natural disasters.

Volcanic Eruptions

Volcanoes eruptions are very dangerous because Volcanoes shot out fire and lava,where does the lava come from magma. Magma is crusty and magma goes through the throat of the volcano then melts then shots out the lava.

 

Earthquakes

Earthquakes are natural disaster that can crash buildings and make the rocks separate.

And do you know that earthquakes are caused by the two tectonic plates because when a two plate

Meets they rub and crash the ground and make the ground shake.

Hurricanes, typhoons and cyclones

Hurricanes start on water and Hurricanes have strong gust wind that the hurricanes even pick up trees. hurricanes have a eye which is in the middle of the hurricane and meteorologists use the greek alphabet for the storm. the clouds in the hurricanes is cumulonimbus.

Tsunamis

Tsunami are mostly caused by earthquakes because when it happens near the water it could shake the water and make a huge tsunami.

But when the tsunami crash it could make huge flood. Some of the tsunami’s flood are mostly bigger than house.

Tornadoes

Tornadoes form on land by a thunderstorm meeting hot air and cold in a rotating motion. The best place to hide in a tornado is the basement. because the tornado cannot reach you because the tornado can only get the roof.  

Floods and drought

Flood mostly caused by tsunamis and rainfall

Because is the drainage is full of water is could make a flood. Some of the country’s has bigger flood than New Zealand.

And do you know that if tsunami hits the town it could make the a huge flood and it would take for weeks to make the flood go away.

Blizzards Blizzards are like snowstorms because blizzards have snow and snowstorms have snow too but they both have different wind speeds. Blizzards have something called white out. White out means its very white and you can't see anyone.

Dust storm

Dust storm are caused by strong wind, dust and dirt at same time. When the strong wind meets then dirt and the dust it could a little sand storm but when the strong wind gets more dust it could make a huge dust storm.

But how do sand storm finish, the sand storm finish when the strong wind stops.

Wildfire by

Wildfires are something that could burn a hole mountain. Wildfires can be controlled by people burning a little spot of the mountain so the fire can't burn the hole mountain

Man-made and natural disasters can devastate people and the places we live in. Although we can’t predict most natural disasters, we can do our best to keep safe and look after our properties and things we value.

Man-made and natural disasters can devastate people and the places we live in. Although we can’t predict most natural disasters, we can do our best to keep safe and look after our properties and things we value.

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Tongan Games

Wednesday the 5th of September 2018, TPS and I had been putting this together as a fun Tongan Language Week. As Havea,Leon and Michael came back from Kapa haka they were shocked what they had saw. They Sprinted and Sprinted Until there energy ran out by the second. “We need to find the others and just have fun” Screamed Michael. ”I Agree” Shouted Havea and Leon They would have to find the rest of there pact or burn to internal flame.

Fusi Maea (Tug of war)

Tug Of War is a 7v7 Combo Wombo Test to see who’s Team is Stronger, We had to Some extreme Force in order to win the 30 dollar prize. I pulled I pulled as hard as I can Until I saw my lost lonely friend He was Bryant. Bryant had no friends whatsoever so he was brave enough to go against The Biggest man on the Field (Timote). He knew he was hard to get by but the only way is to get passed is a challenge against Timote, We knew we would lose so we moved on to the next game.