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Monday, February 19, 2018

Mystery Ride

       Mystery Ride
One summer ago Dad had promised That Jason and James could go to the theme park. They had been begging since Dad had made the promise. “Stop Begging or I will have to cancel the trip” Said dad. Two weeks later Dad Said “ Ok get ready we are gonna shoot off to Rainbow End”.

3 hours later we finally got there we had to wait for Half an hour because the line was massive. We got there and I was surprised well not really because I watched the review and 30 people had died on the rollercoaster.

I got On the Rollercoaster then I was really shocked It had started but I was Very Scared because I heard A Large thump at the back of the rollercoaster Because a rail had been misplaced and that was when I was scared. I hated the fact there was Twists and twirls then coming up next was me going upside down like a bat. I was gonna jump out but the seat belt was holding me tightly. My brother Jason Said “ STAY ON YOU SEAT MAN!!!! YOU COULD DIE”. “Ok Fine” said James.

It was my first experience so I didnt know how to get off or but the seatbelt on.It was finished and my hair was swooned I was about to spew around my Dad but I swallowed it up the breeze around me made me feel so screwed like I'm about to fall off the Ride.


Me and my brother went to the car and told our Dad to never come back here ever again. When the night passed I had nightmares about the rollercoaster. Like i Dreamt about me falling to my doom and drowned in the water. That was a memory I can not take out of my storage unit.

                    The End



Thursday, February 15, 2018

Hauroa

This video is about hauroa with my freinds Davlyn and Railey.
Enjoy the video!!!!!!!!

Monday, February 12, 2018

Dantes lunch

In a time near mexico there was a dog named Dante. He first appeared in a garbage bin then he wobbled his way out to grab a shiny bone.

He bites the bone then gets dragged to the Restaurant then Bashed into a fence. Then tried to stop the bone from running but he Crashed into a wrestling masks and then a cactus shop.

The bone dragged him along the way to a graveyard dante found out it belonged to a skeleton his tongue stuck out then began another ran around mexico again.

Monday, February 5, 2018

First recount-Cammy

Today we talked about recounts, we had to try and remember what goes in a recount.
Here is what we came up with as a class.



Next we watched a video (Link to the video) and we wrote a recount about it as a class.

Who: the little girl, Annabelle
What: she was happy, she broke her camera, threw in the bin, camera came to life, made a photo of the girl
Where: small town, Mexico
How/Why: she slipped off the pole and dropped the camera
When: sunny day, broke it in the morning, camera picture - afternoon

Ideas:
One sunny day
Happy
Picture of a balloon then it popped
Smiling with white teeth
Only Favourite camera

Introduction:
One sunny day Annabelle strolled around her small town, taking pictures of the many beautiful things. Click. Click. Click. She aimed her camera at a light red balloon and it popped just as she hit the shutter button. She smiled with white teeth as the sun rose high in the sky.

Ideas:
Hand slipped off the pole
Swinging, run up to
Fell on her butt,
Big eyes
Camera lense popped out
Laughing - hehe
She sighed
Cuddled the camera, threw it in the bin

She jogged around the town centre, swung around the lamp post giggling and suddenly… KABOOM! Her big eyes opened as she realised she was lying on the ground. Her elbow was scratched and beginning to bleed. Her favourite camera, which she nicknamed Camey was broken next to her on the cobblestones. She sighed deeply. She picked up Camey and cuddled him to her chest, then he fell to the bottom of the bin.

Ideas:
Girl walked up the stairs crying
Shake the bin
Shut his ears,
Click shutter
Pants fell down
Went into garbage
Photo came out of his mouth
Flicked to her foot
She threw it away
Looked?
Closed the door
Has an idea

Annabelle climbed the stairs with tears coming down her face. The bin began shaking, Camey was alive! He tried to get out of the bin, but it ended up tipping over. He crawled out and searched for Annabelle. She was at the top of the stairs, her back to him.  Camey rushed to the stairs and ah! His ears flung open. He pushed his plastic ears closed and kept running. She was almost gone! He pushed down on his shutter button and oh no, not again, his plastic pants fell down. He pulled them up quickly and kept sprinting. A polaroid ejected out of his mouth and he flicked it towards Annabelle. It slipped silently under her foot, but the movement caught her eye. She bent down, picked it up, and slowly let it drop from her hand. She closed the front door behind her and Camey was left outside feeling lonely.

Ideas:
Girl crying, looked up
Surprised
Smile, laugh
Camey smiled
Happy
Button nose

Camey looked down at the disgarded photo; he had an idea. Click, click, click. Photo after photo after photo. He arranged them on the wall in a portrait made with love. Annabelle rested her head on her arms, thinking about her favourite camera ever. Something brushed her arm, she looked up and gasped. A 18m tall portrait of her profile covered the wall of the apartment opposite. She felt surprised and happy. How had this happened? Who had made this gift for her? Then she noticed. Her favourite camera, Camey! How had he gotten up here?!?! She embraced Camey and her smile returned.

She prepared for their next adventure; she picked up Camey, bought a new repair kit and set off for the forest. She wondered to herself, ‘what magical portrait he would come up with next..’

Thursday, February 1, 2018

Whitangi Day



                                   Part 1
Part 2

Part 3